Ledes five publications of July 5, 2015
Newspapers
today front paged stories on UPSC toppers, Ira Singhal being the leader among
them. Lead (lede) of the stories highlighted success of a differently
abled young woman in UPSC examination. Ira is the first physically challenged woman
to achieve the success. Not only that, it also spoke of four girls being the
top rankers.
I carried readability test on the leads of some newspapers
and websites of two news channels. What is readability test? (http://newsmansenglish.in/readabilitytest.htm
)
The focus was on which publications wrote leads that were
easy to understand. Which lead had minimum words, and how did each of these leads
fare in the Flesch Reading Ease and Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level tests.
The
Times of India’s lead today has 51 words, as against the advice of veterans
between 15 to 25 words in a sentence. (NEVER make an intro verbose- let
it not exceed 25 words. (Jyoti Sanyal in Write it Right). Better to aim
for an average of 15-20 words throughout. (Martin Cutts in Oxford Guide to
Plain English). The ToI, thus, has lede with the worst readability score
among the leads of publications studied today:
Following are the
statistics of leads
Newspaper
|
Lede
|
Number of words
in the lead
|
Number of sentence
|
Number of
paragraph
|
Flesch
Reading Ease
|
Flesch-Kincaid
Grade
Level
|
Times of India
|
While
the glass ceiling in the civil services was broken long ago, it was
resoundingly shattered on Saturday when women secured the top four positions
in the Union Public Service Commission (UPSC) examination 2014, with the No 1
rank-holder, Ira Singhal, also being a differently abled achiever, which is a
first.
|
51
|
1
|
1
|
5.7
|
25.1
|
Indian Express
|
Singhal
on Saturday became the first differently abled woman to top the civil
services examination in which women took the top four positions.
|
25
|
1
|
1
|
29.1
|
15.4
|
Hindustan Times
|
Ira Singhal became the first physically challenged
candidate to top the civil services examination that saw women take the top
four ranks on Saturday. And giving Delhi something to cheer about, three of
these women — including Singhal — are from the Capital.
|
41
|
1
|
2
|
41.5
|
12.5
|
DNA
|
Ira Singhal, a physically handicapped IRS officer from
Delhi, topped the Civil services examination in which the top four positions
went to women.
|
23
|
1
|
1
|
19
|
14.9
|
NDTV
|
Delhi's Ira Singhal topped the Union Public Services
Commission civil services exam this year. But celebrations at her home are a
little muted, as her parents are apprehensive about whether she will get a
posting.
|
35
|
1
|
2
|
46.4
|
11.1
|
IBNLive
|
Mahatma Gandhi rightly said, "strength does not come from
physical capacity, it comes from indomitable will." A strong will power
can take you places and Ira Singhal has proved it once again.
Differently-abled Singhal topped the 2014 Union Public Service Commission Civil Services Examination becoming a role model for one and all. Singhal is currently working as an Indian Revenue Service officer after clearing the 2011 exam. She has also done her MBA from Faculty of Management Studies in Delhi. |
80
|
2
|
5
|
36.2
|
12.1
|
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